Nova255

disgusting

ok i didn't see that coming usually that line is reversed.

the Vegito part is what got me to start reading this novel and the Chima part is what made me drop it . that part it just felt weird and pathetic and lame

I mean the Ancient One wrote the story xD. I seen this shity argument by the authors so many times

the chapter was too long. next chapter should be two paragraph only

the Story is boring asfk with a (pathetic narcissistic hypocrite) mc. nothing else can be said

no. but not a whole chapter on a missing passport with a repeated comedy

what a waste of chapter and the comedy keep repeating it self

bye bye

losssssserr he had a second life and still lost