Item: Overlord Ashes of Yggdrasil
Rating: 3.8
Author: Universe_Supreme

Universe_SupremeLv123mth

2024-12-12 01:06

Its pretty good only a few problems I have. There are only a few grammar mistakes, but author doesn't properly paragraph and a lot of the story is in huge blocks making it hard to read. Also this reads like I am reading the MC's diary don't know how to explain that. Hope the author doesn't make the mistake of every other Overlord fanfic and spend to much time in Yggdrasil and lose most audience before even making it to the new world.

Overlord Ashes of Yggdrasil

HRN_Dreadnought

4.5

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Liked by 3 people

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HRN_DreadnoughtAuthor

First of all, your comment made me happy. I have now restored the sections and they are much easier on the eye. Don't worry about Yddgrasil. After the next 3-5 chapters, NPC creations will start and short introductory chapters for each NPC will come and the YDDGRASIL part will end.

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