If you’re expecting a well-thought-out story that makes sense, then you’ve come to the wrong place. As usual, this book suffers from amateur writer syndrome, where the author comes up with a good story idea but fails to consider details beyond the plot they have in mind. They try to incorporate multiple ideas from anime and good books, ultimately oversaturating the story. Sometimes, a simple, well-written beginning is better than a flashy but poorly thought-out one. As a reader, the first few chapters are the key factors in deciding whether I will continue with a story, and this book lost most of my interest from Chapter 1. I read about four chapters, and here are some of the glaring nonsensical issues I noticed: 1. The MC initially didn’t know his mother, but the moment he learns her name, he suddenly acts as if he remembers everything. A more strategic approach would have been to continue pretending to have amnesia and gather more information about the world from his family. 2. The cause of the coma was never explained, and no one even seems to care. It just happened because the plot needed it. 3. The first thing the MC’s mother does after checking on her son is ask if he received confirmation about getting into the academy. Seriously, what are your priorities, woman? Your son just came out of a coma. 4. This concerned and loving mother then decides to leave her formerly comatose and slightly amnesiac son all alone because she has an important meeting. Their family is rich—she could have at least left him with a servant, a family member, or a family friend. 5. The MC randomly decides to complain about the how the protagonist gets everything and he got nothing . Is the first thing you do when you get transmigrated really to obsess over being the protagonist? How narrow-minded can you be? 6. For some unexplained reason, the MC has an obsession with joining the main plot. 7. The MC goes to the black market and, for some reason, is suddenly an expert in weapons. He then randomly decides to buy a rusted sword just because it looks cool or interesting (wow, talk about dumb clichés). 8. The MC appears to have no skills or elemental power, yet these things are sold like groceries in the black market. So why has his multi-billionaire, loving mother never thought about buying something like this for her son? (Don’t you dare tell me she doesn’t know these things exist. No one becomes rich and influential without gaining knowledge.) So did his mother just want her son to be mediocre? Don’t say she didn’t care—she literally handed him billions without batting an eye. All in all, I just hate books that underestimate the reader’s IQ, and this book is a prime example of that. Just saying—almost all good books have a concise and well-thought-out beginning. I won’t be continuing this book, but for the readers who are sticking with it, I hope the writing logic improves.

I started reading it reached chapter 5 and stopped.this novel has no proper substance to it and I can feel it will remain the same in the future.things happening just to facilitate the mc rather than the story in a deeper way....also why does the shopkeeper not want its customers to buy a skill and he keeps suggesting not to buy the skill like who does that and it also states something about an A-rank skill not being a high tire skill....doesn't that mean people in the novel only care about S and SS rank skills it completely butchers the whole power levels of the novel.

It’s quite good, so keep it up like this. I can see a lot of potential in this novel.[img=gift][img=update][img=update]

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The most frustrating thing is mc's charm like hell...His sister and mother are beautiful and he's got their features and YET he is average? call me when his CHARM surpassed the og mc and I'll pick it up[img=angry]

it's quite good, some of the first chapters has spelling mistakes, but the new chapter has everything, you're improving keep up the great work, also, the world building has improved:)

One major issue I had with the book is the way the characters speak. Their dialogues often feel completely unrealistic and disconnected from how people actually talk. It seems like the author is just putting words in their mouths to fill space rather than to develop the story or reveal anything meaningful. As a result, many conversations feel incoherent and pointless.

This novel is good but there are a lot of mistakes in the characters Silas eyes are supposed to be green but they changed to golden brown also Margaret's eyes changed from gray to blue same thing with the hair colors of some characters also Laila's elemental convergence at first it was wind then it became earth then the author said it was earth and wind and in the virtual reality fight she was attacking other students using earth and water there are problems in describing events and abilities what is supposed to mean golden lightning with black fog or in the Physical Assessment when MC's lightning changed from golden to blue then it was described as golden with blue inside it this is a mess in the description does the author use AI in writing the novel I don't want to sound like someone who focuses on the negative side. The author is new and is supposed to accept criticism. This will help him improve and make the novel more enjoyable. I would like to say that the novel is good, but I hope that the author corrects the mistakes in the future.

please update a new chapter soon it's already 4 days