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I think this is a good enough book 📕 keep going I think you can do better but I love where this is going the plot seems good enough it would be cool if you have the girls surprisingly show up to Holos school as transfer students that would be great like those anime cliches where a girl shows up and says to the whole class or school that they live Holo it would be amazingly funny only a suggestion you don’t have to listen to it though it is your novel so do whatever you choose.
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The manager wouldn’t care
I agree with you this is confusing
You say that and spelled while wrong
Why is everyone obsessed with him Lyrim
Are you stupid they’re having sex while he’s in the house that’s disgusting and disrespectful as fuck that would make any child of a parent feel uncomfortable and strange knowing that their mom or dad is having sex in the house they live in dumbass
No not everything can be hacked human intelligence is not all knowing not omniscient
No he does not always lose to Reed
Just saying if your mc’s revenge arc is too light and he easily accepts everyone back and only goes for one woman when all of his women will get taken and won’t be his women anymore I will give your novel an atrocious rating please don’t be disappointing I’m exhausted from reading stories like these having high hopes that the revenge will be awesome only for the mc to continue getting ntr shat on not taking any retribution for the actions done to him