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The mc is already an annoyance so I hate the MC
You need to stop making grammatical mistakes use an app or site to fix your mistakes
Bro how many chapter are you going to have the mc weaker than everyone serious question these chapter even though they aren’t filler fills like a naruto one piece filler
Please, whatever you do don’t drop this novel don’t delete it. It’s really good.
Author you seem to be extreme an masochist. The mother is a piece of trash, including the entire family besides, the sister and the sister also seems to be a piece of trash because she's not physically fighting her family to save her youngest brother. I'm gonna drop this book because I know that this book is not gonna become any better than this and you're also going to have Caspian forgive his family and not abused them the same way that they abused him. this book is garbage. I'm going to give it a 1 star rating.
This novel would be much better if you fixed your grammar and stopped changing every characters name please use Grammarly or another form of AI to fix the mistakes with your novel and then edit your novel and paste the correct grammar with the correct names of the characters, please it is difficult to tell who’s who because you constantly switch the characters name up all the time
You need to correct your grammar
Yes but with overwhelming intelligence and cunning and precise gaslighting and misdirection including an enemy of an enemy is almost my friend that’s what Samael does but he also allows people to walk over him I’m trying not to drop the novel because of that but it’s becoming increasingly difficult
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