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DemonizedDemonLv51mth
2025-01-20 03:38

I feel the story is OK, it depends on your tastes. The protagonist feels a bit soulless and the story just jumps straight into the main scene with a bit of prologue with the sole purpose of introducing the sister-in-law, not uncommon though. Speaking of which, while it seems the author has a special place in their heart for sister-in-law(s), it seems that they don't really show much love for them. The girl (woman??) just kind of lays on the side waiting for the protagonist to tell her what to do. Being a person who almost married the leader of a financial group, you would at least know the different walks of life and have your own thoughts. Hmm perhaps I'm griping too much about it.

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whimsical_clownLv12

exactly , it lacks a bit too much of logics.... 😭😭😭💔

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