Item: Inertia: Beneath the Starlit Veil
Rating: 5
Author: Vn_bTw

Vn_bTwLv33mth

2024-11-23 19:18

I will be real, getting here I came with no expectations in mind but The First 3 Chap had me in a Necklock, bed-shooking position. I already Love Cyrus’s character, The world Building is Fresh (I mean the idea) we haven’t had this type of novels in a while around here. The execution so far is Chef Kiss. I can sense The Author’s taste being tinged by other Novels like SS, LOTM, TBATE , etc, which adds a rich and Refreshing feel to the story and the way it was executed. So far soo good and it has mad potential, I wish all the best for the Author. S/N: THE COMMUNITY DEMANDS A DISCORD SERVER FOR INTERACTIONS WITH THE AUTHOR. (The Link in the T app has expired quite a while ago now, although I think you have already taken it down.)

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