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Christian_Lareguy
Christian_LareguyLv119d
2024-11-24 09:51

I really like the story and has the power system slowly start, I think there's a lot of room for it to be a great work.😁 I came from tiktok and it's my second time reading a novel, so I expect a lot out of this story. hope there will be a webtoon soon, in like 1 or 2 year's !!

Inertia: Beneath the Starlit Veil

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Tsukasa0
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Came from tiktok as a big fan of this guy, read the novel and as a guy who's been writing novels here for almost an year now, I can definitely say this is better than 80% of what this platform has to offer, a very good job at it. Something I would say not as a criticism but as an advice from someone who's experienced on this platform, is the title. It isn't bad. It's actually quite good. Though WN favors clickbait titles like I'm the strongest and others so that's that. Besides that, great job fr

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Omar_Mahir
Omar_MahirLv1

Just wow. has so much potential I’m so excited for you keep up the good work and just enjoy

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The_librarian1500
The_librarian1500Lv11

even though this is a new novel, let the author write ✍️ more and a chance to develop his story to great piece of fiction

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Aqua_w
Aqua_wLv1

Man the introduction kept me interested, the mc is already goated asl, this novel has alot of potential and i look forward to seeing how the world building will look and the side cast. Keep up the work gng

20d
Zenix_comp
Zenix_compLv2

W start it feels like Cyrus might have an inner demon or alternate personality based on that 3rd chapter conclusion love the work

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neske0
neske0Lv2

As soon as i saw first chapter i said hold up this is good. Every chapter is better then previous one! Keep it up!

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NikroniousLDD
NikroniousLDDLv1

The story so far has been a blast. The story is paced very well and has a great style. The characters have a lot of personality and are easy to like. The world already shows much promise and feels like it's going to be one for the times. Then there's the power or magic system which has a fun premise to it. Unfortunately the story just started so there's not too much to say, but from the little we got, I can already tell this will be great, and I have high hopes for it. The best of luck to the author, and keep up the good work. When it has more chapters, I'll make an actual in-depth review, but so far 6 chapters in this has been my first impression.

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Imkoro
ImkoroLv10

Overall a very interesting read. I’m ready for the journey of following this series every week!

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Eli_5642
Eli_5642Lv1

From what we got it is a really interesting idea but the writing needs to improve, i don't mean this in a bad way for example you use the same words a lot of times like I , I said ,I thought you could next time use stuff like as i said, thinking to my self, doing so basically try and use different words. The second issue was you don't let us find stuff for ourselves for example when Cyrus's dad tanked the fire ball and said "I'm immune" it sounded dry and boring try only hint that he has those abilities aside from these issues it's really good 👍

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