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this review is written after reading to chapter 54. Overall and quick? worth a try. give it a try and see if u like it. the story is alright and interesting enough as well as the translation. Now i was expecting more science and stuff so, hold back your expectations qhen you go in with accurate science representation in mind. The applications are there, but no explicit mentioned reasoning in most cases are the process of getting there. Overall, a good read

Great translation with very few mistakes !!!! They are hardly noticeable !! The story is good and unique !! I hope this story doesnt lose its uniqueness !!!

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So far so good. But the only Science I've seen was only using lightning(ch 56), I was expecting him to create some chakra based technology.

I was excited when iIread the title and summary, i thought there would be a lot more science involved. sadly, there were only a few mentions here and there. pacing is pretty slow, as of chapter 140 it's still in the 3rd world Shinobi war. mc doesn't have much personality and has no goals. the humor is quite good sometimes. the translation is generally pretty good, but there are glaring mistakes. yamashiro aoba became yamakage, then yamanaka, then suddenly became shikamaru nara. kurenai suddenly became yugao. zabuza was described as one of the 7 swordsmen of the mist when he should not have joined at this point.

There's no science 🧪😔 stuff mc just discovered all stuff through lightning jutsu like magnetism only there's no invention Worthy to be expected. BLA BLA BLA BLA BLA BLA BLA BLA

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