Shixie here, you're free to read my shitty translation, drop a review and comment if you like it
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I have read the word shitty many times in the time I've been reading this book. All of them from translator notes and constant comments from you in brackets. Shitty isn't commonly used in English apart from low brow street talk, and low quality translation from Japanese. Just removing this word from the story would drastically improve the current level of quality of the story. If you remove the constant comments from the translator between paragraphs it would be an even bigger improvement.
thats shitty, im sorry
Transhumanist:I have read the word shitty many times in the time I've been reading this book. All of them from translator notes and constant comments from you in brackets. Shitty isn't commonly used in English apart from low brow street talk, and low quality translation from Japanese. Just removing this word from the story would drastically improve the current level of quality of the story. If you remove the constant comments from the translator between paragraphs it would be an even bigger improvement.
You are incorrigible my good man.
ShixT9:thats shitty, im sorry
I like that word that's why I use it a lot, as for the constant comments, I enjoy doing it my dude it's fun, just like how you like to spot mistakes. You seem to have a lot of negative air around you my guy. You're reading a fictional within another fictional story, breathe in some fresh air and enjoy life... I apologize for my reply earlier, I didn't mean to offend you.
Transhumanist:You are incorrigible my good man.image
Eh, I found your reply funny not offensive. Hence the laughing gif I posted. Maybe I should try harder to convey the emotions I'm feeling when I post a comment. (By the way I was bemused and bewildered when I read your last post.)
ShixT9:I like that word that's why I use it a lot, as for the constant comments, I enjoy doing it my dude it's fun, just like how you like to spot mistakes. You seem to have a lot of negative air around you my guy. You're reading a fictional within another fictional story, breathe in some fresh air and enjoy life... I apologize for my reply earlier, I didn't mean to offend you.
This is just a misunderstanding then, let's just end it this way. My bad bro, I apologize for the misunderstanding
Transhumanist:Eh, I found your reply funny not offensive. Hence the laughing gif I posted. Maybe I should try harder to convey the emotions I'm feeling when I post a comment. (By the way I was bemused and bewildered when I read your last post.)
