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Reincarnation_God
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2024-12-05 20:58

WQ: decent, its easy to read and there are few grammar errors. 3/5 stars SD:I've only read a few chapters not all of them but the story is devolping nicely, don't know if it stays that way so 3/5 stars. CD: The idea is fasinating, but it does seem to be a hermione bash. And it has put Ron and Albus in good light. Both characters I hate. Also the reason I dropped so SD didn't get a better rating. Ignore that if your fine with it. Also Harry was a little too open to showing off whitcher magic. 1/5. US: A nice update shcedule, but that can always change so 3/5 stars. WB: it's the harry potter world. 4/5 stars

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michaeI
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I've been translating for 239 days continous and I don't plan on stopping anytime soon so 3/5 for update schedule?

Reincarnation_God
Reincarnation_GodLv14

fair point, but I'm too lazy to redo it. I wish webnovel let you edit reviews

michaeI:I've been translating for 239 days continous and I don't plan on stopping anytime soon so 3/5 for update schedule?
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michaeIAuthor

Yes, there is minimal romance in the later chapters.

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Yes.

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