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Ironlotuce
IronlotuceLv133mth
2024-12-25 06:20

Although I usually don't enjoy fanfiction where the MC is harry potter, this book managed to pull it off spectacularly. I particularly enjoy the fact that this is not harry going back and redoing everything, but really harry experiencing this magical world for the first time, just with the added Witcher experiences. The story seems realistic, mentioning how harry was only in the Witcher world for 40 years and how he was not like a legendary Witcher yet since he had no title and hadn't started his path yet. I do love the dynamic brought on by his Witcher physiology, namely how he no longer has green eyes and how that impacts his interactions with Snape. In the end, the author does a great job building up the characters, slowly developing them while avoiding annoying clichés and bias (like Ron being annoying and Dumbledore being manipulative, they still are those things but its toned down to more realistic levels). I will enjoy reading this book for a while to come. In the future, I would love to see some more realistic fights (like he killed the basilisk pretty easily, which although might be a testament of his skills, I would assume would be harder than that). I would also love to see Harry start something, not just reacting to the upcoming trials. maybe he can try to go back to the Witcher world, or try some Witcher sorcerer style elemental magic (so not just sword/armor stuff that has become his focus), right now it feels too much like he is just reacting and preparing which I'm not complaining too much since its the smart thing to do.

Hogwarts: Harry Potter’s Return from the Witcher World

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4.4
312 Chs

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BlackSoverain
BlackSoverainLv12

Definitely one of the most constructive reviews out there for this ff. I agree with you aswell, this has a few rough patches here and there but if you told me this is a Chinese work at first I wouldn't have believed you. This Harry's actions full makes sense with his experience. As you said, 40y of Witcher knowledge will naturally have impact on his character and development. He's not overpowered by itself and is not a regressor either, making us readers a fresh new take on the original (events happened similarly till year 4, Peters death and Crouch Jr's early discovery changed how year 5 enacted).

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GzeroX
GzeroXLv4

this trash. its a chinese translation, a bad one at that, with the typical racism towards anything not percieved right. i could actually relate wizards to chinese in that aspect. the format is shit, typical webnovel where ppl think one sentence needs a new paragraph or worse in dialogue it cuts mid sentece for a new paragraph. plot is shit too, nothing about how he started in witcher, plot hole after plot hole. it chinese counterfit, it looks the same just not the same quality how ppl can rate this 5 stars is beyond me

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MasterOfTheDadJoke
MasterOfTheDadJokeLv5

TL;DR Off to a great start, awesome job. Give it a go! Full: Only 10 chapters in, but I feel like I’ve found a hidden gem. It’s refined, a little quirky, a little funny, but it’s got heart. It’s also nice to see a perceptive, talented, smart and determined Harry in the making. I’m looking forward to how he handles the future dangers and a potential return to the Witcher World! Please keep up the good work bro! Sincerely, DadJoke.

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mothblade
mothbladeLv12

Ok here’s the deal after 60 chapters. This book follows a Harry Potter that is truly insightful. This attribute is not an easy this to write in an HP story with your MC knowing seemingly knowing the future. This story is very well done the at is a must read for HP fans. My suggested improvements would be towards including more of Harries history in the Witcher world and to make use of POV of those near harry to show not tell the differences his more mature behavior has on other character growth.

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Vengeful_Slave
Vengeful_SlaveLv3

The only thing I can say is, I'm surprised. Like I for real came here with near zero expectations, but now I am thoroughly enjoying this. Harry character is amazing, all the other characters retain their personalities and they don't feel like one dimensional characters. Honestly I absolutely recommend it.

4mth
DRAVIDIAN
DRAVIDIANLv12

This is a wonderful translation, the errors you’d see in shoddy translations don’t seem to be present here and the characters aren’t acting like “young masters” or other archetypes you’d expect from Chinese fics, this is genuinely good. Stable updates, good quality writing and an interesting story, give it a go. My only questions are: Will there be romance? Since he’s older maybe an OC or someone like Fleur would fitting Will Harry ever manage to return to the Witcher world, even if briefly? His contacts there can’t just be ignored right?

2mth
mothblade
mothbladeLv12

Still new 4 chapters in but I see a good future with this story. It’s a Harry Potter that has a intense life experience as a Witcher making him far more mature before entering the wizard of world. This author is great at slice of life so I can’t wait to see how a mature dangous Harry without regression knowledge or being raised in secret like many other authors do before he tackles his dark rival while learning about his original work. Can’t wait to see if when his time in his home world is over will be go back to the Witcher world with his new knowledge?

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Reincarnation_God
Reincarnation_GodLv14

WQ: decent, its easy to read and there are few grammar errors. 3/5 stars SD:I've only read a few chapters not all of them but the story is devolping nicely, don't know if it stays that way so 3/5 stars. CD: The idea is fasinating, but it does seem to be a hermione bash. And it has put Ron and Albus in good light. Both characters I hate. Also the reason I dropped so SD didn't get a better rating. Ignore that if your fine with it. Also Harry was a little too open to showing off whitcher magic. 1/5. US: A nice update shcedule, but that can always change so 3/5 stars. WB: it's the harry potter world. 4/5 stars

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MeLucawolf
MeLucawolfLv4

Im really loving this so much I love Harry personality I can’t stop laughing

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DaoistXziFAy
DaoistXziFAyLv4

i am too confused there are changes chapter by chapter

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