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JerryI
JerryILv21mth
2024-11-19 06:07

There are useless chapters when the mc moves between worlds, just as the mc himself chose the curse and the disease lycanthropy for some reason, and no these curses did not make him a super imboy, he could have become one anyway, given that he has the ability to "devour", perhaps this is some kind of fetish of the author or he wanted a rich mc, but this makes no sense, because there are more problems than benefits, there are also a lot of Mary Sue, mc can turn into a human thanks to the ability of a werewolf? of course, that's exactly how it works. Also, despite the fact that mc has ice magic, nightmare sand and a magic staff, he does not use them at all. Also, when mc met a sorceress who cursed him, instead of tearing her up on the spot and devouring her, he behaves like a virgin for the first time and is afraid of something incomprehensible, although he himself chose to be cursed. The author also made the number of words, and for this it is necessary to punish.

The Curse Prince Domination

PHONEIX_PRIMA
4.2
19 Chs

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Gato_Bolado
Gato_BoladoLv2

I agree with absolutely everything, take the torches!

1mth
18
Tarawa
TarawaLv13

id rather pick all jack frost

1mth
8
Scrapze
ScrapzeLv4

Same would love to see a Jack Frost one even with a cross into other ice themes in Disney

Tarawa:id rather pick all jack frost
28d
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Kervz_Sour
Kervz_SourLv3

indeed! let us sing!

28d
3
Bisker_Islam
Bisker_IslamLv2

I got tired I never understood the character of the hero every time I feel the character is npc the idea of ​​the story is good and the beginning can be said that it is good but after that I did not understand anything as a prince of a country in a world from ancient times there was no war why did he become a virgin not even a normal person like me a doctor who saw more blood than disgust why did you need to vomit and I did not understand everything why does he act kindly with the witch what is the goal of the hero from going out why do you feel that the news in the village is more than the news in the prince's palace why is he ignorant of everything any of his personality even if he was a pervert or a good person explain the important thing you need to rewrite the story is really good and the world building is good but you started it badly even if he went why doesn't he look for a magician to bring him back or check other places

20d
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Bisker_Islam
Bisker_IslamLv2

I think it's a good choice for the monster power with Jack's ability but the hero is just a piece of shit with no feelings just an NPC

20d
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Setsuna_04
Setsuna_04Lv1

I need more please don't drop it author 🫡.

1mth
trxs300
trxs300Lv12

ok this is the first time I read Disney fanfic and am looking forward to more i wonder if this will be a Disney multiverse :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D

1mth
prvcx_00
prvcx_00Lv12

word count chapter in ch7. come on man. this was good. unfortunately, just had to ruin it

1mth
TRUCKSAMAA
TRUCKSAMAALv3

Algo completamente nuevo e interesante de leer, no es exelente pero la premisa es atracción. Leeré hasta donde llegue el autor con esto........................................................................................................................................................................................................

1mth
Humbuub
HumbuubLv4

The premise is fresh, but the execution could be better. I definitely did not like the existence of devour, it's an easy cop out to everything. I was looking forward to a story that relies on interactions and how to break the curse, but with devour, I fear that this would be another "I'm gonna beat all the enemies and devour their abilities" kind of fic.

1mth
AbelWizard
AbelWizardLv3

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1mth
DeathE
DeathELv14

Feels a little rough, but I'm looking forward to reading this when there are more chs

1mth
Cosmic_Witcher
Cosmic_WitcherLv4

A truly excellent start, I’d say. The introduction of Coco World at the beginning of the MC’s journey was a particularly clever decision. I hope you'll take some creative liberties with the crossover, rather than sticking too closely to the original storylines. Can't wait to see where this goes! Best of luck to the author, and I sincerely hope you complete this novel.

1mth
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