This book was bad—just disappointment after disappointment. I will not read the next one. I read until the end to see if anything changed, but clearly not. So much for having a reincarnated person who, in the end, contributed 0, changed absolutely nothing in the original story, and died in the end after living a life full of heartbreak and loss—losing the system, losing lovers, losing one arm, and dying as a failure with “honor.” MAIN POINTS: -CHAT GPT -LOST SYSTEM -LOST ALL LOVERS -LITTERALY CHANGED NOTHING TO THE ORIGINAL STORY
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ok thanks for the advise. I'll try to change these aspects in future stories.
as long as you improve from this
I hope so, the idea of this book was very good, also try not to rely too much on chatGPT if you can or at least heavily edit the prompt, this is because most of the time the text seamed unnatural to read (robotic even)
Thanks for the save
Thx for the poison test.
Yeah like actually writing your own story lol maybe start there
