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Kaal2806
Kaal2806Lv31mth
2024-11-29 17:57

So...... I have been following you work since the first fic. The story had it's ups and downs but was enjoyable. I know you have a stack ready for future updates but the Current story has become too monotonous. If possible just make sure that in his 3rd year he has his first world hop. Please pay attention to gacha too. The gacha must be meaningful and never...... I repeat NEVER ever give out useless rewards. It can be anything from a set of clothes to systems. The gacha must not not give some dirt or rusted nails,etc. It MUST be something useful. Even a dull sword has it's own uses. Again, love the story but it can always be better, so try your best.

World Hopping With Gacha

_TheWatcher_
3.4
70 Chs

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_TheWatcher_
_TheWatcher_Author

yud i did have a slow build up but now i am currently re designing a bit so as to end this world enter a new one.

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Altairshadow00
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Garrick_D
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Ugh.. the original version of this story had a much better premise. Not only is the mc here a burgeoning edgelord, he’s incredibly close to just being a villian. You gave a character that’s suppose to have Arthur’s memory’s and powers to a person who isn’t even close to what Arthur encapsulates as a person. Unless the mc was just so evil that it took Arthur to even him out to neutral, then I don’t think the character works at all.

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Aroa_alra
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3 times the charm right? Well the fic starts weird, you dont know the mc motives or anything until that weird chapter, then it keeps being weird because the mc doesnt change anything about the story? There are maybe 3 or 4 interactions with the other characters, and none of them have an impact in the mc, well, apart from Tonks, which is actually an enjoyable character. All in all a 6/10

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skya7a3
skya7a3Lv4

story alright so far . I really hope that the author doesn't make the mc eage lord .mc doesn't have a goal, which is a problem . overall, 6.5 / 10 will see what the author does in the future and which world does he visit

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JustTiredOfPicking
JustTiredOfPickingLv11

2.8/5 4|4|2|1|2| The writing is decent. || can't say much abt updates for now (rewrite). ||unreasonable badly executed nerfs, edging XD, || unlikeable, dumb rtard of an mc that throws tantrums and whines in every other chap. || meh||

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SSan1212
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The writing and characters lack depth and emotion. It’s like eating boiled broccoli—sure, it’s healthy, but there’s no flavor to savor. Similarly, while the English is technically sound, the story itself feels bland and lifeless, offering nothing to truly engage or excite

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Ansh_5456
Ansh_5456Lv1

Way of writing is comfortable to read, Character development! Well it's good but he can be a little more firm. Like in hogwarts Arthur took a little too much time to decide to take action or not But All in all plot was good Best of luck 👍

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