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Ugh.. the original version of this story had a much better premise. Not only is the mc here a burgeoning edgelord, he’s incredibly close to just being a villian. You gave a character that’s suppose to have Arthur’s memory’s and powers to a person who isn’t even close to what Arthur encapsulates as a person. Unless the mc was just so evil that it took Arthur to even him out to neutral, then I don’t think the character works at all.

Character with a template can't use anything from said template. Makes story altering decisions, then gets depressed because he's not participating in the story because he doesn't want to change the story. Trained from the white room, but doesn't have any training. Kills a bunch of Gangsters, but still acts like a whiny b****. This isn't a story for me.

story alright so far . I really hope that the author doesn't make the mc eage lord .mc doesn't have a goal, which is a problem . overall, 6.5 / 10 will see what the author does in the future and which world does he visit

2.8/5 4|4|2|1|2| The writing is decent. || can't say much abt updates for now (rewrite). ||unreasonable badly executed nerfs, edging XD, || unlikeable, dumb rtard of an mc that throws tantrums and whines in every other chap. || meh||

The writing is good the story line is good, but sometimes it's meh. I won't say it's a 5 star story but I have gotten interested enough in the story that i want to see where the story leads. Also points to be noted Don't use the same words phrases too many times. Also don't try to stretch the plot unnecessarily like you wanted to do With the first world to stay until the very end there's no use of it. Also World Hop more frequently.

Way of writing is comfortable to read, Character development! Well it's good but he can be a little more firm. Like in hogwarts Arthur took a little too much time to decide to take action or not But All in all plot was good Best of luck 👍

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So...... I have been following you work since the first fic. The story had it's ups and downs but was enjoyable. I know you have a stack ready for future updates but the Current story has become too monotonous. If possible just make sure that in his 3rd year he has his first world hop. Please pay attention to gacha too. The gacha must be meaningful and never...... I repeat NEVER ever give out useless rewards. It can be anything from a set of clothes to systems. The gacha must not not give some dirt or rusted nails,etc. It MUST be something useful. Even a dull sword has it's own uses. Again, love the story but it can always be better, so try your best.