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The story itself is interesting, and I like how the plot is progressing. The frequent updates are definitely a plus and keep the momentum going. However, the writing really needs a lot of improvement. The grammar, sentence structure, and flow make it difficult to fully enjoy the story.
the story itself is interesting, but there are a lot of grammar mistakes
it is very unusual to see a story about a time traveler who becomes the Russian emperor, Russia is now a very large country, and I read that when Russia was an empire, it occupied a larger territory than now, and this provides really many opportunities for the development of the empire, the most important thing is that he does not have Lenin in the future, otherwise it will be bad馃槀馃槀馃槀
The novel itself, the topic, is quite interesting, but the main problem I have with this novel is it feels like I'm reading a Chinese translation. There's some misplaced metaphors that I do not get. Each time I read it, it feels like it does not match with the other paragraphs. I don't know if it's just me, but yeah, that's how I interpret this novel in the beginning chapters because it's turning me off to continue reading because it's that prevalent.
Can you please differentiate between whose POV story is going on the chapters and I can't differentiate who is speaking what in dialogues.
....................................................... a question? is a pay novel? .......................................................
Is this harem or no harem??? Hope it is single female lead
I really do like this novel, the story premise and its character is good to decent at some point. The only minus for me is the Grammar. It feel Google Translator 90% of the time but I still enjoy it even if it makes me dizzy at times. Hope the Author use a grammar correction tool such as Grammarly etc or hire an editor.
legendary novel but please improve the translation
Fascinating plo, not a lot of historical fiction especially with a Russian Empire updating is excellent.Highly recommend
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