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Biscuit_willieonLv142mth
2024-11-13 21:19

The novel itself, the topic, is quite interesting, but the main problem I have with this novel is it feels like I'm reading a Chinese translation. There's some misplaced metaphors that I do not get. Each time I read it, it feels like it does not match with the other paragraphs. I don't know if it's just me, but yeah, that's how I interpret this novel in the beginning chapters because it's turning me off to continue reading because it's that prevalent.

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Machine_Writer
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Thank you for your honest review! As a new author, I'm still learning and improving as I go.

Wilder6
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Is there modern knowledge/techology usage for kingdom building in this novel?

Machine_Writer:Thank you for your honest review! As a new author, I'm still learning and improving as I go.
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