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2024-11-13 18:20

I think this novel is developing pretty well. Things are developing well, my only concern is that the woman who will be the Tsar's wife needs to be convincing. So it might be better if he finds someone who is either from the far east or someone who is interesting. That's my opinion, keep up your good story, Sir Writer.

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