The first couple of chapters are a bit rough to read, they have no breaks between paragraphs and there is little to no punctuation, but all this is mostly fixed in later chapters. As far as grammar goes, there are a few mistakes here and there, like sentences missing “and” or things being spelled wrong. For the most part it does not take away from the reading experience and you can still understand what is being said. I like the overall concept of the story and I will continue to read more chapters as they come out. Keep up the good work Author!!!! ………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………… …………………………………………………………………………
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LIKEthank you for your input I am working on Ch6:birth of chaos and destruction It's probably going to be my favorite one to write i would like to give you a small preview Vince:from chaos and destruction i am reborn from the ashes like an Phoenix the power to ensue chaos and destruction flows through my veins not even an elder dragon can handle power of my magnitude gods will tremble before my might.