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KingLettuce

KingLettuce

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  • KingLettuce
    KingLettuce4 days ago
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    The idea of the story is very intriguing but I think it needs to be fleshed out more. The pacing is very fast which is fine but some chapters feel like they skipped something or are out of order. There also is not much of an explanation/reason for things being the way they are like the mc’s mental issues. All things consider while the story needs a bit more work, it is a good read and I enjoyed it. Keep up the good work Author!!!!!!! ………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………… …………………………………………………………………………

  • KingLettuce
    KingLettuce8 days ago
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    So far the story is very interesting and different from the copy and paste Naruto stories out there. The translation is good and there are no issues to speak of so far. All in all a good read, keep up the good work Translator!!!!!!!! ………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………… …………………………………………………………………………

  • KingLettuce
    KingLettuce17 days ago
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    First and foremost the story is pretty interesting, but it has a couple of things I consider issues. The main one is the repetitive use of the same descriptive language, it often feels like the same things are described the same way multiple times in the same chapter. The only time I’ve run into this is with stories written with the help of ai but in this case that could just be how it was written. Aside from that, the chapter lengths are very good and the story is moving at a decent speed pace. Keep up the good work ………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………… …………………………………………………………………………

  • KingLettuce
    KingLettuce20 days ago
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    This is a good read overall and I have enjoyed what I’ve seen so far. The only complaint I have is there are not enough chapters released for me to read. The pacing is a little slow but for this story I don’t mind that. ………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………… …………………………………………………………………………

  • KingLettuce
    KingLettuce24 days ago
    Posted

    This is one of the first Tokyo ghoul fanfics that I have read that isn’t immediately assaulting me with cringe and edginess. The story is actually interesting and seems to have a plot that can go somewhere unpredictable. The grammar is good and the length of the chapters are also good. Keep up the good work Translator!!!!!!!! ………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………… …………………………………………………………………………

  • KingLettuce
    KingLettucea month ago
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    The translation itself is good, there are no issues with grammar that I noticed while reading it. The story itself is also entertaining to read and portrays characters or people from 40k pretty good. The chapter lengths are also good, overall nothing to complain about. Keep up the good work Translator!!!!!!!!! ………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………… …………………………………………………………………………

  • KingLettuce
    KingLettucea month ago
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    This really made me chuckle quite a few times, honestly this is peak writing. There is nothing to complain about at all, keep up the good work Author!!!!!!! ………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………… …………………………………………………………………………

  • KingLettuce
    KingLettuce2 months ago
    Posted

    I liked this a lot surprisingly, there is genuinely nothing to complain about in the story so far. Keep up the good work Author!!!!!! ………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………… …………………………………………………………………………

  • KingLettuce
    KingLettuce2 months ago
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    Pretty decent, grammar is good and chapter length is also good. The portrayal of Price is also pretty good and it doesn’t feel out of character. I can’t wait to read more chapters, keep up the good work Author!!!!!!! ………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………… …………………………………………………………………………

  • KingLettuce
    KingLettuce2 months ago
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    This is a good concept and so far everything is moving in a good direction. Keep up the good work Author!!!!!! ………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………… …………………………………………………………………………