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2024-11-12 14:02

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Tobirama_uchiha777
Tobirama_uchiha777Lv14

Hmmm. What can I say about this fic, well it blew my expectations, it was a roller coaster cuz author translated Chigga’s fic with his own flair and tried to remove the Beckham glazing which I commend him for taking for the team(chigga was fully gay for beckham and I felt the thirst even with filtered content so I cannot fathom how much brain cells author musta lost while dealing with it ). But then it changed cuz the translation is not completed and now it’s under full autonomy of author AAAAAAND he did it. The FIC IS IMMACULATE, the characterisation is perfect and never seen at this level usually for a football fic. It doesn’t seem forced and flow’s steady. There are pointers to be considered for the author; these are not criticism but something that can elevate this fic. 1) Like focusing on realism a bit more and interactions system too (although I’m loving it unlike OP system which would exhaust the fic and make it saturated). Loved his interaction with LI and also that the author researched it. 2)Making the match a bit more detailed (not on an extreme level but getting those details specified) as it seems sometimes he comes and assists or scores on the same wavelength if you get what I mean… otherwise further on the chapters or as it progresses then it would be like repetitive. 3) Maintaining a constant chapter length rather than burning out which may occur if you do this thing. Saw many authors who have left writing or kept amazing fic on hiatus, which is something I don’t want for this one as football ones are rare. APART FROM ALL THIS, the FIC IS INCREDIBLE AND I’D RECOMMEND EVERYONE TO READ IT

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