Nothing against you but the way he the same sentence is used to answer every Interview question makes it an extreme turn off although its good to be humble but if the same sentence even if put out differently used in every answer then this is just bad character and story writing. (,,Its all thanks to my Team,, literally as answer to every questionthe interviewer asked but way longer and the fact that Mc answer are all extremely long makes it just feel uncomfortable especially when they are all the same no matter the question) It just feels like he can’t use any other words and another example is how he answered 2 or 3 questions in row with Absolutely instead changing the words to make it not look like a repeat for example he would use ,,Right, Agreed, For Sure,, and many other words to make the con conversation feel more natural. Don’t know if you made it like that or if you just translated it how its written but yeah its just annoying.
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LIKEYour not wrong, that was more of my own fault, as I just directly translated the chinese chapters for like the first 30 chapters without rewriting it, which reminds me to rewrite those chapters and if those are your biggest concerns, I would suggest just skipping those chapters and reading from like the FA Cup final
I try
I'm working on it; the first 2 chapters have been edited and rewritten. I just didn't think people would read this story but here we are so efforts have to be made