The actual story is good, but your translation drops in level every chapter. The 34 chapter is unreadable at this point. ............................................................... ............................................................... ............................................................... ............................................................... ...............................................................
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LIKEman I'm just saying that these are proof reading faults and he should be critisied where he makes faults a para or two is fine but it's like 10-12 chapters in a row and still no changes that's why iImentioned them out
So rather than translation quality, the issue is the lack of editing. Most translations from CN tend to just be MTL, often barely edited. AI got better at translating than MTL from a few years ago, but it still doesn't get context, and Chinese authors almost never respect cultural differences when writing fanfiction, and even keep using tropes specific to cultivation novels
Sure is budy 😂😂, if you are reading this stuff and not cringing every two paragraphs then you my friend have the thickest mind out there. Ps. I highly doubt you'd get the joke.