"If the past is a lesson to learn from, and the future is a chance worth waiting for, then does that make the present the crossroads where mistakes meet opportunity?"
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It was a masterpiece, until the chapter where he joined the ilvermorny school. His whole personality changed overnight, he let some fucking stranger push him around like a lakey. He let his pride dictate his actions ALL THE FUCKING TIME. DROPPED!!!!
So, we're in marvel now ?
Sound of all things !!!!???
I don't really understand why I dislike this so much, but I can give you a rundown of what I don't like about it. First, the Mc is as bland as a gen-z amarican wife's cooking. Second, why is it that you're avoiding the fact of him being too fucking good at chakra Control, and making it seem like it's another natural thing that happens. Third, if you're going to use chatgpt to edit your story, then why not just ask it to make the whole thing up, maybe then it'll be good enough for these fake ass 5-stars reviews.
It's not a cultivation story buddy.
I hope so, there are no good overlord fanfics these days. If you consistently upload this month, I'll delete my review.
The way it was written implied for it to be so.