So far the story has a lot of potential and I kinda enjoy the mc, I just hate the fact that during one of the beginning chapters he let himself get punched on the stomach and didn’t get revenge
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first of all , I am thankful that you spent some time reading my novel , I hope you enjoyed the few chapters I updated till now , it's good that you see some potential in it . as for the second section , Kyel is an aloof Indifferent person , In his previous life he lacked desires , he didn't have dreams or goals . He would let himself get punched bruised , And even killed without muttering a word , that was the kind of a man he was . but in this new world full of possibilities, There would be another turn of events .
Yeah see I really hate the fact he has no pride. Would prefer it if he fought back, I hate when mc takes shit from others.
IndifferentVillain:first of all , I am thankful that you spent some time reading my novel , I hope you enjoyed the few chapters I updated till now , it's good that you see some potential in it . as for the second section , Kyel is an aloof Indifferent person , In his previous life he lacked desires , he didn't have dreams or goals . He would let himself get punched bruised , And even killed without muttering a word , that was the kind of a man he was . but in this new world full of possibilities, There would be another turn of events .
So he’s basically similar to Choyun from Questism
IndifferentVillain:first of all , I am thankful that you spent some time reading my novel , I hope you enjoyed the few chapters I updated till now , it's good that you see some potential in it . as for the second section , Kyel is an aloof Indifferent person , In his previous life he lacked desires , he didn't have dreams or goals . He would let himself get punched bruised , And even killed without muttering a word , that was the kind of a man he was . but in this new world full of possibilities, There would be another turn of events .
Hope there’s some character development and he gains pride
IndifferentVillain:first of all , I am thankful that you spent some time reading my novel , I hope you enjoyed the few chapters I updated till now , it's good that you see some potential in it . as for the second section , Kyel is an aloof Indifferent person , In his previous life he lacked desires , he didn't have dreams or goals . He would let himself get punched bruised , And even killed without muttering a word , that was the kind of a man he was . but in this new world full of possibilities, There would be another turn of events .
I see the mc as similar to Choyun. Both were indifferent
IndifferentVillain:first of all , I am thankful that you spent some time reading my novel , I hope you enjoyed the few chapters I updated till now , it's good that you see some potential in it . as for the second section , Kyel is an aloof Indifferent person , In his previous life he lacked desires , he didn't have dreams or goals . He would let himself get punched bruised , And even killed without muttering a word , that was the kind of a man he was . but in this new world full of possibilities, There would be another turn of events .
