Story is well written, and has quite a bit of future potential. Just remember this though, if you yourself, enjoy writing your stories, then that is the one thing that should matter the most more then anything else. Sometimes, it is not about any sort of money or payment, but should in fact, always be about enjoying sharing your work with your viewers and fans. And that, should always take priority, because if your fans and viewers enjoy reading your work, as well as potential future generations, then that is the one thing, that should matter more to you then anything else. For you see, people are more concerned in living in the here and now. While people me, we like to have a more, long game in mind. Now, don't take this as some sort of negative by any means, I am just saying, that if we want future generations to enjoy this world, then we have to be willing to protect what we love, in an effort to do our best to better our future.
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well spoken mate , don't worry am not taking it negatively , ur words means a lot , plus I do enjoy the story am writing , I keep yearning for the future events whenever I write , but am not doing it fast , besides not going fast paced, I keep it slow to enjoy every moment of it , Kyel's journey has just begun and so My journey as an author here . again thanks for the words
Also, for those who are wondering just what it is that I am on about? Why not go and have a read of my fanfics, and then you will see exactly what I mean.
