Item: Multiversal Hotel
Rating: 4.6
Author: Felhavon

FelhavonLv45mth

2024-11-10 01:09

I really like the premise and the writing quality despite the amount of exposition. Not quite at the point of taking a paragraph to describe the color of a leaf but not that far off either at times. MC's trauma feels a bit like it's being forced to add depth so I hope that's not a big ongoing thing. Overall, it's looking like an excellent story with potential.

Multiversal Hotel

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