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Sanjay_K_L
Sanjay_K_LLv144mth
2024-11-16 19:11

bro you have been explaining how tough the mc life is in his past in every chapter as far as I read. I love the story but the fillers which suthor uses in every chapter makes it tough. author is trying to make mc relatable to his customer I can understand but instead of completing in a single line you were Steaching it too far. for a past 7 chapter the story didn't move at all. just telling mc past for 3/4 part of the chapter and actual progressing is too slow.

Multiversal Hotel

KujoW
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KujoW
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thanks for the feedback, i can see the point you're making. I appreciate your review👍👍👍

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