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I mean... Might be a mistake? But at the same time who wants the Joker with comedic plot armor hanging from their neck.
Excellent work! I kind of understand people screaming like rabid animals about the cuck stuff but... he kind of holds all the cards in the whole polyamory setup. The girls can have fun without him there but if he leaves everything would fall apart. What I really want to see is Sean in Worm. Similar concept but maybe running a shoe store in partnership with Parian, or a coffee shop, etc. The premise of Dead End Bar really lends itself to spinoffs.
Yes
100% a smooth way to become a technopath.
Good! Nice to see characters other than MC being aware. You almost never see, "Oh, that guy seems to want to kill my friend, maybe I'll keep an eye out". It's always, "Heheh, big fight, I'm strong, no need to worry".
It's unfortunate he's just shy of being a cosmic being and this not being an issue. Pretty sure he couldn't be snapped at that point either.
Interesting so far. The writing style seems a bit, immature?, is how'd I'd put it but amusing nonetheless. The flashbacks near the start were a bit much but overall the slice of life aspects were nice to read. This type of story needs really frequent updates or you'll lose the interest of the readers as it seems a bit difficult to just hop back into. Just my opinion. Thanks!
Thanks for the chapter! Can't say I'm enjoying the odd drama happening all over the place though. He's got this grind mindset, has just been told he's going to die, and doesn't immediately jump up to either gain more power or fix the issue? "Nah, school"
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