I had read another one piece fanfic which was based on sign in too and that was disappointing. I didn't have much expectations from this one too , but ngl this one's good

So far this story is entertaining and balanced. The MC is still quite young and even though he has a cheating system that most stories would use to rocket the MC to the peak this story seems to recognize the importance of character development and actually allows the protagonist to experience the world more before jumping into the more chaotic waters. Knowing the plot and making subtle changes here and there the protagonist makes his mark on the world without completely subverting the plot… which is something that seems appropriate for the time being but I hope the future will see many changes culminating into a new experience while possible eliminating some of the undesirable elements of the original series. I can’t say much more as the story is only beginning but the plot is enjoyable, the writing is skillful, the characters are reasonable, the power given to the MC isn’t too far fetched in the world of Onepiece, the current company he keeps doesn’t effect the canon, and I have high hopes for a grand adventure as the story unfolds.

Well, it started off really well, but it kind of lost its charm when he started teaching “Kuina” the Breathing that was the secret to his strength, basically he gave her his power just because he could, without any reason. It's like you're handing out a weapon to someone who could use it against you at any time, that attitude was pure idiocy...

Quite an interesting story , consider me fully intrigued and left wanting for more. I hope you release chapters regularly. Voted powerstoness!!

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Good so far, can't wait for more chaps. ............................................................ ............................................................ ............................................................ ............................................................ Have a great day!

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great , totally great !! i love the mc n his power , keep it up man ..................,.,......................................................

The story is upto a great start. Other than the MC teaching Kuina his abilities things are progressing great. Hopefully you continue writing the story.