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Knight_Noctis
Knight_NoctisLv45mth
2024-10-30 20:57

It's not a bad story for a translation. But sadly, with the rate that kid gets everything , he would be way too much op . The biggest problem is the way mc reveals stuff so easily, and nobody questions him . Like the Thunder God jutsu or the incursio armour. Like people just accept it and move on . It gets pretty boring then .

Naruto: You Call This A Medical Ninja?

GGFanfiction
3.4
596 Chs

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GGFanfiction
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I will be uploading a new story tomorrow. Check it out, I think it would be more to your liking

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GGFanfictionAuthor

Honorary Author Review: Let me know what y’all think and if there is anything that needs improvement

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Raja_Sihir
Raja_SihirLv2

If you can, please change the MC's name to a Japanese name so it's not confusing. [img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it]

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GGFanfiction
GGFanfictionAuthor

Hello Everyone, I changed the MC’s name to Reiki I might’ve missed some spots please also I had to go over chapter 12-14 please let me know if there is anything wrong there

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xAsura_
xAsura_Lv14

Interesting story. However, the reason for such a low score is directly because of the story lack of progress. We see Danzo constantly trying to kill the MC and the MC doing f*ckall. At this point of the story I decided to drop it since it's obvious that the same point will recur being: Danzo attack, MC defend himself, Hokage meet Danzo, "It's your last warning, Danzo.", and everything restart from there. The translation work if good and the cheat nice but in the end it's nothing more than that.

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Martial_Pursuit
Martial_PursuitLv4

Chinese fanfic, the quality is so low they are borderline courting death. The story has no tension with how OP the character are. Personally to the translator you might as well take the story and rewrite it. Take the bare bones of the original story and makes your own with a strong MC rather than an OP one. OP MC needs a well written story and I doubt the original book could done it.

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Vlad_6413
Vlad_6413Lv3

Fcking 7 year old MCs going to war and fighting Kage Level Ninjas.

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TehHawks
TehHawksLv15

Reveal spoiler

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Skydro
SkydroLv13

The author doesn't even know what he's writing. It all makes no sense. If the author starts making a character panel, at least take 5 minutes to fix it and not just copy it.

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Domanick_Jamison_6982
Domanick_Jamison_6982Lv4

like both story and translation is good but it (the translation) feels so choppie and missing pieces of story that its giving me a headache

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