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GGFanfictionAuthor28d
2024-10-29 09:46

Hello Everyone, I changed the MC’s name to Reiki I might’ve missed some spots please also I had to go over chapter 12-14 please let me know if there is anything wrong there

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Biswas_Nepali
Biswas_NepaliLv4

Bro have you even re-read this. Are you just google translating this and ony copy past this. You only just change mc name to a japaneses name but where is the change in ''time travel'' it should be ''world or dimension travel'' how can time travel place him in naruto no matter how back or ahead the mc go in time he would not reach naruto. And lastly this mc died by over work and he just cut him self with no hesitation woth in 30 mins of his new life is this mc empty in the head.

GGFanfiction
GGFanfictionAuthor

My guy, the description states that this is a translation. The story is up for only 3 days now and has 75 chapters. I’m sorry for not paying a professional editor to fix every little thing in it. If you see an error leave a comment and I’ll get back to it. The story is just a bit of meaningless fun, calm down

Biswas_Nepali:Bro have you even re-read this. Are you just google translating this and ony copy past this. You only just change mc name to a japaneses name but where is the change in ''time travel'' it should be ''world or dimension travel'' how can time travel place him in naruto no matter how back or ahead the mc go in time he would not reach naruto. And lastly this mc died by over work and he just cut him self with no hesitation woth in 30 mins of his new life is this mc empty in the head.
Transhumanist
TranshumanistLv14

I've written comments on every error I've seen. You can correct them if you want .

GGFanfiction
GGFanfictionAuthor

Thank you so much. I’m going over the posts that I have to upload later today so I’m gonna be a bit late in fixing everything but it will all be done by tomorrow

Transhumanist:I've written comments on every error I've seen. You can correct them if you want .
Master_Celestial
Master_CelestialLv4

He's called Roy in the Synopsis. You might want to change that if you changed his name.

Akash_Lohia_1904
Akash_Lohia_1904Lv4

bro chapter are incomplete it always ends in half check it.

GGFanfiction
GGFanfictionAuthor

Which one?

Akash_Lohia_1904:bro chapter are incomplete it always ends in half check it.
GGFanfiction
GGFanfictionAuthor

Which chapter?

Akash_Lohia_1904:bro chapter are incomplete it always ends in half check it.
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