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2024-11-30 10:07

Ich persönlich muss sagen dass die Space Marines aus Warhammer 40k nicht wirklich in die Star wars Galaxie passen da sie reine Kampfmaschinen sind die alles nicht menschliche und was nicht zum menschlichen Imperium gehört als feindlich ansehen. In Warhammer 40k gibt es kein Gut oder Böse sondern nur Krieg, immer wärmer Krieg und ich persönlich würde nicht in dieses Universum leben wollen, denn in diesem Universum werden die schlimmsten und härtesten Eigenschaften der Menschheit in den Menschen hervorgebracht, denn ohne sie würde die Menschheit ausgelöscht werden. Star wars ist eine space Opera in dem es um den Kampf Licht gegen Dunkelheit geht, das gute gegen das Böse, die Jedi gegen die Sith und die Rebellen ging das Imperium. Und in diesem Zusammenhang sind die Menschen innerhalb der Star wars Galaxie nur eine Gruppe von einer großen Gesamtheit von vielen verschiedenen Spezies. Mein Fazit ist dass die Geschichte einfach keinen Spaß macht wenn die Space Marines einfach alles abschlachten.

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Greenbaypitbull
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i appreciate your criticism. for anyone not willing to translate, essentially what he is saying is that the two universes dont mesh well together and that the story isn't very fun because the space marines just go in and slaughter everything. i would say i completely understand your position, but i would encourage you to keep reading, as we are only 11 chapters in. the space marines are not just gonna curbstomp everything, i can promise you that!

Jarod_Lane_8547
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I love the idea author!

Greenbaypitbull:i appreciate your criticism. for anyone not willing to translate, essentially what he is saying is that the two universes dont mesh well together and that the story isn't very fun because the space marines just go in and slaughter everything. i would say i completely understand your position, but i would encourage you to keep reading, as we are only 11 chapters in. the space marines are not just gonna curbstomp everything, i can promise you that!
Arion_Sturmklinge
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me too

Jarod_Lane_8547:I love the idea author!
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