Probably the best 40k x Star Wars fanfic I've ever read, the Space Marines are depicted in a way that it feel like they came straight from terra and their interaction with the aliens seems very accurate to the 40k lore. All in all i love it!

being both a starwars and 40k fan, this story takes both without demeaning the other. the author here has done a very intresting retelling of the phantom menace and with having only 3 astartes has shown how much of demigods they are into the starwars universe, has done enough of the perfound changes already taking place for attack of the clones. looking forward to how this plays out and the future episodes too

Probably the most perfect start to any starwars or 40k fanfic I've read (and I've read a bunch) great job sticking to the characters attitudes instead of having them bend to the new place they are at. I also love how you have 3 different astartes perspectives that all differ even if slightly. Can't wait for more chapters. Do you have a Patreon with advanced chapters?

I think it's really good, I hope to see what else you're going to change in the plot. .................... ..............................,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,.,.

This has been amazing so far. Literally every chapter has me excited for the next. I’m so pumped to have found this

Ich persönlich muss sagen dass die Space Marines aus Warhammer 40k nicht wirklich in die Star wars Galaxie passen da sie reine Kampfmaschinen sind die alles nicht menschliche und was nicht zum menschlichen Imperium gehört als feindlich ansehen. In Warhammer 40k gibt es kein Gut oder Böse sondern nur Krieg, immer wärmer Krieg und ich persönlich würde nicht in dieses Universum leben wollen, denn in diesem Universum werden die schlimmsten und härtesten Eigenschaften der Menschheit in den Menschen hervorgebracht, denn ohne sie würde die Menschheit ausgelöscht werden. Star wars ist eine space Opera in dem es um den Kampf Licht gegen Dunkelheit geht, das gute gegen das Böse, die Jedi gegen die Sith und die Rebellen ging das Imperium. Und in diesem Zusammenhang sind die Menschen innerhalb der Star wars Galaxie nur eine Gruppe von einer großen Gesamtheit von vielen verschiedenen Spezies. Mein Fazit ist dass die Geschichte einfach keinen Spaß macht wenn die Space Marines einfach alles abschlachten.

its cool i mean its space marines in star wars!!! and its well writen

5/5 Read it.

Great work. I like how the space marine is depicted in this novel. Keep the good work author. 😎👍

As far as Warhammer 40k fanfics go this one feels like the most accurate representation of space marines that I’ve read. The story is progressing nicely so far and in a direction that makes sense. The grammar is good and the chapters are a nice length. Definitely a solid 4.8 out of 5 stars. Keep up the good work Author!!!!!!! ………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………… …………………………………………………………………………