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2024-10-30 02:35

it's a decent read i think the personality is really well written but the plot comes off as really forced and it is. i don't really get the whole forced relationships either and then when emma was freed she just went back to her usual plot? i'd expect some development like she actually falls in love with him or something and then he reveals the whole system because instincts lol i don't really know what to say other than this fanfic won't go far good luck man

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