bondarant

i feel like the harem part is taking over the story the author is on a horny streak in my opinion even the sex or romance scenes are written like a teenagers fantasy idk bruh i hope you bounce back from this

eved....

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i've been following this story for 4 years i'm quite sentimental about it yes it has its ups and downs but honestly 4 years gone like that i didn't even realize will this story ever be finished? i don't know but i think even the journey was good enough my best regards to the author hope you're doing well my man cheers

its been 3 years i tried to reach the author and texted him on discord also but just dead silence hope hes okay im still here buddy i havent forgotten you i hope you come back safe and sound

the lore is kind of buns 🥀💀

i can't say the characters were good most of its just morally ambigious but the concept of the system and all it was pretty interesting at the time and this was one of the first fics i read when i started using webnovel i see author hasn't been active since 5 years hope you're doing ok my guy

the idea is good its just not done well heavily used ai to add word count to the chapter just added a word salad none of it makes sense and it keeps repeating itself anyway

i feel like this fanfiction is becoming more and more porn with plot instead of actual meaningful dialogue and interactions

suicide is a permanent solution to a temporary problem