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2024-10-28 12:28

I like and dislike the main character of this novel. He's a great guy, and I understand his moral dilemma about not wanting to get with women who were forced to love him by a god. However, now that Emma sees him as just a friend, it wouldn't be wrong to pursue her. But I don't think he ever will. The bad things about this novel are: 1) The MC can't lose weight, which is either a weird fetish of the author or just plain weird. 2) The writing is erratic, and the author needs to slow down. 3) The MC is a slave to the system, which is excessive and annoying. 4) I don't like the romance direction. I thought Emma was going to get to know and like the MC, but that doesn't seem to be the case. 5) The MC overshares his powers, and the Loki situation was weird and forced.

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