4/5/5/4/5 Fantastic story that had me so hooked that I caught up in one session. The setting is very unique and refreshing, with the protagonist taking a path through the plot that I‘ve never seen before. The protag is very much a mixed bag of personality traits, that which makes him compelling to follow. The training to reach the power level he was at when he met Law wasn’t really communicated well at all, though the power progression improves drastically. There were a few moments of wordy dialogues and immersion breaking inner monologues but all-in-all the author does a good job. Character adaptations are done excellently, though I feel Law might be a bit off. But most importantly, finally an author that isn’t scared of making a story outside of the Straw Hats. Check this story out, and thank you for your work author.
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