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ApproachingStorm
ApproachingStormLv135mth
2024-11-10 13:11

MC is mad that the game's protagonist gets distracted by women --> Gets transmigrated --> Immediately gets distracted by and led on by his own maid

An Extra’s Rise in an Eroge

Sensual_Sage
4.3
232 Chs

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just_looking_
just_looking_Lv2

Well unlike protagonist, MC is getting rewarded and gaining strength for doing the very thing.

5mth
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ApproachingStorm
ApproachingStormLv13

still a hypocrite

just_looking_:Well unlike protagonist, MC is getting rewarded and gaining strength for doing the very thing.
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5mth
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Ellipse_ark
Ellipse_arkLv13

ApproachingStorm:still a hypocrite
5mth
8
puremichigan
puremichiganLv15

Let me join in watching this 😂

Ellipse_ark:
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5mth
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Bisker_Islam
Bisker_IslamLv3

True

ApproachingStorm:still a hypocrite
4mth
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bak_ap
bak_apLv1

The hypocritical situation is kind of tolerable. The author could have been using the MC's anger with the original game protagonist to make MC question himself about what makes him different from the game protagonist in action and thought. The MC may be mad or not but doesn't matter in the end he is interesting in a way, since the sex scenes shows that he can satisfy the woman, but he isn't in it for an emotional connection, just to rack-up points and materials. Though the MC is kind of ass given that he does not provide after-sex care to his partners or show restraint so that they don't get injured, in one occasion MC even causes an injury to his maid, despite the clear refusal given by the maid, MC insists hence he injured his maid. The MC did heal his maid with the help of the system, which begs the question, without the system what is the MC? can he do without the system, with just his resources, wit, and strength? The MC has narrative potential that can be explored to see the character of the MC which is why the MC is interesting.

2mth
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DaoistArbore
DaoistArboreLv14

Sounds like the MC is just a r*pist

bak_ap:The hypocritical situation is kind of tolerable. The author could have been using the MC's anger with the original game protagonist to make MC question himself about what makes him different from the game protagonist in action and thought. The MC may be mad or not but doesn't matter in the end he is interesting in a way, since the sex scenes shows that he can satisfy the woman, but he isn't in it for an emotional connection, just to rack-up points and materials. Though the MC is kind of ass given that he does not provide after-sex care to his partners or show restraint so that they don't get injured, in one occasion MC even causes an injury to his maid, despite the clear refusal given by the maid, MC insists hence he injured his maid. The MC did heal his maid with the help of the system, which begs the question, without the system what is the MC? can he do without the system, with just his resources, wit, and strength? The MC has narrative potential that can be explored to see the character of the MC which is why the MC is interesting.
2mth
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super_galactik
super_galactikLv1

wat will u do in his place .

2mth
Sumit_Indi
Sumit_IndiLv12

excellent choice of words my friend. sounds perfect for the description and sounds kinda those half assed villain shit

DaoistArbore:Sounds like the MC is just a r*pist
2mth
7
Zero_8X
Zero_8XLv1

Então compensa fazer isso pelo menos kkkkk

just_looking_:Well unlike protagonist, MC is getting rewarded and gaining strength for doing the very thing.
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2mth
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AculturedCitizen
AculturedCitizenLv12

So far meh. MC is a total hypocrite - he acts like “oh the game is targeted towards porn addicts and I’m better than that” but the moment he reincarnates , he’s thinking about smashing his maid . Keep in mind , he’s yet to know nothing about the world or why he got into his current body. And the powers are literally random marve/ DC power ups so nothing interesting here as well

3mth

SYED_AFAQ
SYED_AFAQLv4

author is there Yuri or ntr in it hope not also how big mc harem is

5mth
Kirigaya_Yuuki
Kirigaya_YuukiLv3

I need to point out that the scene from chapter 120-122 is plagiarized from a korean novel 'The main heroines are trying to k*ll me'. it disappointed me that the author is so shameless as to steal a scene from that novel without even doing a good job editing it, like there's no effort except changing the names and interaction a little.

1mth
just_looking_
just_looking_Lv2

Loving it. Carry on. [img=strong][img=strong][img=strong][img=strong]

6mth
DaoistLwCnMT
DaoistLwCnMTLv4

For gods's sake please change the novel picture it isn't even appealing

6mth
Chris_Gill
Chris_GillLv15

Writing quality isn't bad, but after many chapters where the author repeats paragraphs sometimes even twice in the same chapter is questionable as it is frequent even withing first 70 chapters. I will admit author does a good job with gender pronouns so that is a plus. Character development is lack luster as author makes the MC ask the blatantly obvious stupid question like a child so they can explain something easy to understand. (my example "That is a jumping frog". "what is that?" "it is a frog that jumps". All it takes is a few sentences written differently to add IQ points to the MC.. CH 70 - 71 this is painfully demonstrated. This causes the story development to just degrade any confidence in the MC.

2mth
SwordDemon876
SwordDemon876Lv12

Love the overall story and it's pace so far. Would love to see a more mature character design for the MC. Also there are repetition of paragraphs in some chapters hope to fix them for future readers. Best of Luck for the novel and I will love to see how to goes.✌️

4mth
Alphus_Silver
Alphus_SilverLv4

the book is great , does the author have any discord ???

1mth
Aaron_Moore_3225
Aaron_Moore_3225Lv14

honestly I can even say whether it be a good story or not I've listened to 100 chapters and honestly I still can't figure out what the storyline is there's a lot of filler chapters that you can skip over and not lose track of the story up to this point there's no real definitive storyline

1mth
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