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MGSR_Sam
MGSR_SamLv1324d
2024-11-01 14:53

story is bland, and there is not much emotion. needlessly buffed overhaul quirk. mc is mary sue every day chinese mc, no thoughts, head empty, strolling around the story. mc creates a chimera and how he did it explained afterward with no details, nothing but a patchwork for plot holes.

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Luel
LuelAuthor

Ouch 😅

MGSR_Sam
MGSR_SamLv13

sorry, but I gotta be honest with you, or you wouldn't be able to fix your mistakes. don't get me wrong, you are willing to spend time and effort writing stories. it would be such a shame not to improve yourself as a writer. I wish you the best.

Luel:Ouch 😅
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