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Mubashir_Jaleel_4501Lv44mth
2024-10-24 02:27

bro it's so good ,Writing and story are both amazing i hope you will keep writing

I am Overhaul in Jujutsu Kaisen World

Luel
4.0
77 Chs

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Fran_0178Lv1

This isn't Overhaul's power, it's an amped-up version on steroids and without the limitations that simply throws all the bets out and makes everything extremely boring and predictable. The character is ridiculously powerful, he can basically do the same thing as Suguru and Mahito, only easier, better and without the consequences, and that's just two aspect of his power. What he does should normally be possible only with the domain expansion technique.

4mth
42
10

MGSR_SamLv13

story is bland, and there is not much emotion. needlessly buffed overhaul quirk. mc is mary sue every day chinese mc, no thoughts, head empty, strolling around the story. mc creates a chimera and how he did it explained afterward with no details, nothing but a patchwork for plot holes.

4mth
30
5
GarbagePandaLv1

Its... bad. Not even like in a few points of criticism way, its just all around low-quality, to the point that its grating to read. Bro flipflops his personality after 20 chapters and just starts hanging on his aunt's words like they are gospel despite him very much not having a personality even somewhat like that so far. That is the only 'Critique' worth actually mentioning. Everything else is so obvious a high-school student would be quoting their teacher. I decided to just drop it when the Author decided to make him go to Kyoto instead of Tokyo because "Auntie Told Me To."

3mth
16
1
AgniFaradelLv2

As I have seen in other comments, it is a waste of time to explain why the rating. The characters are bad, the plot is meh, the development is meh, the writing quality is average, as is the story.

4mth
14
2
Khma_JishanLv2

Bro its amazing...please dont drop this...I have a suggestion if you dont mind its just instead of 2 short chapters every day why dont you combine it to 1 chapter and release it....But yeah the story is kinda great...Please keep going

4mth
10
4
NyxioLv10

It’s AI slop. 🤮🤢🤮Webnovel needs an AI tag…the way Aai constructs sentences, the repetitions, the common phrases, it all makes me vomit. Doesn’t give me confidence in “author’s”, if you can even call him an author, original book that this fanfic was supposed to display his skills for…

3mth
8
Sindria_0639Lv4

my biggest problem is the chapter lengths are incredibly short

4mth
3
GetokumLv1

História bem rushado,tema e ideia é muito interessante mas jeito que foi desenvolvido não foi tão bom,escrita parece muito i.a palavras muito repetidas,MC meio idiota tipo ele sabe do futuro e simplesmente sai contando que sabe sobre personagem mesmo sem eles se conhecerem isso é no mínimo suspeito e ainda mas auto escalão jujutsu não fazer nada respeito,mesmo tag tendo MC é op poxa MC mal é adolescente e muito fora curva já tem consciência alma,técnica reversa,controle bom energia mesmo sem único raio negro,eu nem li resto mas se duvidar vai até ter expansão domínio aberto se ter sequer 4 meses treino,fora que autor não parece realmente interessado em tente melhor,afinal ele te fazendo história pra ele ler

2mth
2
Peyton_Patterson_1092Lv3

I liked the story and I thinks it's good but let us hear the mc thoughts and tell us why overhaul is on steroids and is easy to control

2mth
2
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