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2024-10-25 05:49

Well, I posted a one star review earlier with some criticism on much of the bullshits and Sam being able to create technology that honestly requires way more intelligence than I believe he truly has. That shit nears level twelve intellect so I keep that point here. Beyond that, I followed the author's advice and kept reading. Not too bad considering everything else, there are enough good bits that can make you enjoy what's happening, but Sam's abilities really don't match the technological level of the cybertronians so there's still a lot of bullshit all the way to chapter 15. But if you can ignore all that it's readable, and you can get some enjoyment out of it. For the author, honestly, it would be better if you could build up his abilities from low to high gradually instead of coming up with all the things you did. Also, I don't think there is, but if so, you should add an AU warning at the description cause this can irk many readers, I included. That's all, good work and keep on doing your best, I hope your writing skills can grow as you publish more chapters.

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