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Lucius_Frey
Lucius_FreyLv1527d
2024-10-24 23:36

Not badly written at all, just not really what I was expecting This isn’t transformers Sam but a Sam that’s has beyond Tony stark level intelligence near super human physical abilities and a slight healing factor. I feel like a certain degree of relying on tech and ai in a story makes it less fun for me personally so I stopped reading it but if that’s your thing than go ahead and give it a try.

I am Sam witwicky(SI)

Theshadowveil7
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MARLENE_ANGEL
MARLENE_ANGELLv1

AUTHOR DO NOT QUIT THIS NOVEL WHEN YOU START..DO NOT BE A DUMB BxAxSxTxAxRxD like ALL THE AUTHOR THAT HAVE written TRANSFORMERS STORIES AND DO NOT FINISH,, author does not waste my time by not finishing this novel.,, SAM NEED TO BECOME RICH, NOT POOR AND SAM BECOME A PRIME OR GET A SYSTEM Thank you AND DO not quit AUTHOR

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SwordDomainGod1
SwordDomainGod1Lv14

Well, I posted a one star review earlier with some criticism on much of the bullshits and Sam being able to create technology that honestly requires way more intelligence than I believe he truly has. That shit nears level twelve intellect so I keep that point here. Beyond that, I followed the author's advice and kept reading. Not too bad considering everything else, there are enough good bits that can make you enjoy what's happening, but Sam's abilities really don't match the technological level of the cybertronians so there's still a lot of bullshit all the way to chapter 15. But if you can ignore all that it's readable, and you can get some enjoyment out of it. For the author, honestly, it would be better if you could build up his abilities from low to high gradually instead of coming up with all the things you did. Also, I don't think there is, but if so, you should add an AU warning at the description cause this can irk many readers, I included. That's all, good work and keep on doing your best, I hope your writing skills can grow as you publish more chapters.

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DaoistkTSOhu
DaoistkTSOhuLv1

AUTHOR if you do another Transformer novel why not.. novel name is TRANSFORMERS IN MASS EFFECT UNIVERSE they fight the reapers and help the heroes of Mass Effect. REINCARNATED MC GET THE ALLSPARK AND CREATED TRANSFORMERS WORLD AND EMPIRE,, we do need more Transformers novels in here.

1mth
Unicron_Primus
Unicron_PrimusLv1

I AM A TRANSFORMERS FAN..THIS IS GOLD..THIS NOVLE HAS THE POTENTIAL FOR MULTIVERSE TRANSFORMERS -DC-MARVLE-ANIMES-GAMES WORLDS..THIS IS EPIC START

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_VOIDLESS_
_VOIDLESS_Lv5

Did you just rewrite perfection, WHY what went through your head to make you rewrite this!!

26d
NunuXD
NunuXDLv12

Author said he was rewriting it but this is just slightly better than the original. The Mc isn't changing anything from the cannon besides fixing bee's voice... Bro have a army of Iron man suits and never used it just because the author don't wanna change the cannon 👎

22d
Nyxio
NyxioLv4

We need more transformers fics!! [img=update][img=update][img=update]

27d
NunuXD
NunuXDLv12

Heavy AI usage, at the point you usually read the same thing twice on every chapter, or every chapter a lot of words are wasted of Sam, Jarvis or Bee thanking each other for any reason. Probably some AI thing, but is still readable. As we don't have any good transformers fic, you can use this one to pass some time.

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No_Name_Character
No_Name_CharacterLv3

Seria legal ver ele viajar a outras realidades como Marvel MCU, ou algo do gênero. //////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////

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