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2024-10-25 04:47

Its fine nothing crazy about it seems forced in a way. the writting feels plain like no emotions from anyone and its hard to write like that idek how. and then mc telling koneko about kuroka is forced. And theb mc acting like he wasn't intreasted in rias to dating is to big of an change you can hold on and not force it which you did and thats where i seen this fic being meh not great or very bad.

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