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ACHILLESLv44mth
2024-10-24 10:43

Okay its better than i gave it credit. Writting great, Rekationships Great, now you need to work on managing mc own time as it seems he appears less than the others. As well as create his character, look we all don't like him joining scotts pack as that also gives him less personality as it seems you forcing him with plot nothing unique about him, No guts, recklessness or nothing forceful so he feels passive and joining scott pack assures us of this. I'll say focus more chapters on him and extra time like background and do this after this arc as you started him in action he couldn't show the readers his character. 2 Focus on an trait of his that make him unique or atleast diffrent from the others whether its him being clumsy or something of the sort just please have him be atleast passive aggresive or write him as such as he's too trusting. (Friendly=plot forced it looks like that to us keep in mind he shouldn't) trust scott and them fully for no reason like he did. Now my vote for girl will be Alison but its more than likely malia or lydia so many fics of them.

Teen Wolf: Lone Wolf

Gangnem
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ACHILLESLv4

Also give the author an chance for his first fic i think it was insanly well done (Minus the cover pic for whatever reason i get gay vibes from it so i'll look for something else.

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After this arc, I’m planning to set up more moments to show Blake’s character development later on. As for the romantic interest, nothing is decided yet. Like I said before, it’ll be a natural flow—if it feels like the connection could blossom into something more, then of course, but it won’t be a one-and-done deal. It’ll have its fair share of ups and downs, just like any real relationship. There’s even a chance it could end up as a poly relationship—you never know. Blake will get a lot more screen time in the next arc. Right now, it’s more about him settling into Beacon Hills. As for whether he’ll join Scott’s pack, that’s still undecided. For the entirety of Season 3, he won’t join. Then in Season 4, I’ll put it to a vote: should he stay a lone wolf, join Scott, or form his own pack.

ACHILLES:Also give the author an chance for his first fic i think it was insanly well done (Minus the cover pic for whatever reason i get gay vibes from it so i'll look for something else.
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Daoist2RrctWLv1

para cuando el capitulo author

Gangnem:After this arc, I’m planning to set up more moments to show Blake’s character development later on. As for the romantic interest, nothing is decided yet. Like I said before, it’ll be a natural flow—if it feels like the connection could blossom into something more, then of course, but it won’t be a one-and-done deal. It’ll have its fair share of ups and downs, just like any real relationship. There’s even a chance it could end up as a poly relationship—you never know. Blake will get a lot more screen time in the next arc. Right now, it’s more about him settling into Beacon Hills. As for whether he’ll join Scott’s pack, that’s still undecided. For the entirety of Season 3, he won’t join. Then in Season 4, I’ll put it to a vote: should he stay a lone wolf, join Scott, or form his own pack.
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ACHILLESLv4

Alright great i'll be fine with the poly idea as yk wolves usually have extra mates. And then him joiningn scott i be okay with it but still the mc shouldn't just join because he's friends with them yk he's also an Alpha. So i mean him being lone wolf could be him just helping them in times of crisis or when Alison or who he gets with is potentially danger. Also is mc gonna be weak like scotts true alpha or diffrent and( couldn't he take deucalion spark as revenge?) Just an idea.

Gangnem:After this arc, I’m planning to set up more moments to show Blake’s character development later on. As for the romantic interest, nothing is decided yet. Like I said before, it’ll be a natural flow—if it feels like the connection could blossom into something more, then of course, but it won’t be a one-and-done deal. It’ll have its fair share of ups and downs, just like any real relationship. There’s even a chance it could end up as a poly relationship—you never know. Blake will get a lot more screen time in the next arc. Right now, it’s more about him settling into Beacon Hills. As for whether he’ll join Scott’s pack, that’s still undecided. For the entirety of Season 3, he won’t join. Then in Season 4, I’ll put it to a vote: should he stay a lone wolf, join Scott, or form his own pack.
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ACHILLESLv4

did you drop?

Gangnem:After this arc, I’m planning to set up more moments to show Blake’s character development later on. As for the romantic interest, nothing is decided yet. Like I said before, it’ll be a natural flow—if it feels like the connection could blossom into something more, then of course, but it won’t be a one-and-done deal. It’ll have its fair share of ups and downs, just like any real relationship. There’s even a chance it could end up as a poly relationship—you never know. Blake will get a lot more screen time in the next arc. Right now, it’s more about him settling into Beacon Hills. As for whether he’ll join Scott’s pack, that’s still undecided. For the entirety of Season 3, he won’t join. Then in Season 4, I’ll put it to a vote: should he stay a lone wolf, join Scott, or form his own pack.
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I plan to release one chapter per day, and if I feel like it, maybe 2 or 3. So make sure to post your thoughts about the story so I can stay consistent and improve.

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