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I assume your a bot but first of all the story is getting dropped and a new one will be made and second of all when has the mc joined another alpha pack?? scott is still a beta currently in the story so either you are just a bot that is trying to ragebait or your a weirdo that assumes being friends with somebody is akin to "submitting" or some bs
Do you mean im doing smt completely diff from the show or just my original story?, cause if you meant the show it will still be based in the teen wolf show and centered around that.
You read just two chapters or something from Dany’s point of view and you’re already complaining? How do you expect a story to properly develop its characters if it only uses the main character’s POV? I actually like it when the author includes different perspectives—it makes the other characters feel more alive and real, rather than just stepping stones or plot devices meant to support the main character.
My comment wasn’t meant to be hateful, by the way. I just wanted to point it out, you know? Otherwise, I really enjoy your story! And yes, I don’t mind that their relationship progresses quickly—I’m not really a fan of slow burns or anything. I just thought it was a bit weird that they started calling each other "babe" so soon, but that’s about it. Nothing else, really
I'm a bit confused—did I miss something? I noticed this with the previous chapter as well. When did their relationship advance so quickly? At first, they were going to take it slow, but then, without even talking about it (at least to my knowledge), they somehow became boyfriend and girlfriend and started calling each other "babe" and everything. When did this happen? How did they go from teasing each other and being sweet on the phone to suddenly dating the moment she landed, without anything actually happening in between?
i have not watched it myself but the reviews seems kinda bad thats why im planning to change the whole plot of the movie, so basically it will be a custom arc.
one or two chapters coming today, and then daily
After this arc, I’m planning to set up more moments to show Blake’s character development later on. As for the romantic interest, nothing is decided yet. Like I said before, it’ll be a natural flow—if it feels like the connection could blossom into something more, then of course, but it won’t be a one-and-done deal. It’ll have its fair share of ups and downs, just like any real relationship. There’s even a chance it could end up as a poly relationship—you never know. Blake will get a lot more screen time in the next arc. Right now, it’s more about him settling into Beacon Hills. As for whether he’ll join Scott’s pack, that’s still undecided. For the entirety of Season 3, he won’t join. Then in Season 4, I’ll put it to a vote: should he stay a lone wolf, join Scott, or form his own pack.
can you state why you think it is a wack fic?
Whenever Blake isn’t in Alpha or werewolf mode, he has this unique, shy confidence. It’s not the kind of shyness where he barely talks—he’s still approachable and engaging—but there’s a quiet charm about him that makes him even more enticing.