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2024-11-14 05:32

I'm going to give my honest review, I hope the author doesn't feel offended or demotivated by it. Firstly, the name of the book is extremely misleading. Author, being completely frank and honest with you, she is not Slaneesh, nor has she been reincarnated as her. She was just reincarnated as a demon-looking mutant, that's all. I was quite disappointed at first, as I thought I would see a Chaos God in Marvel causing confusion and terror, not a girl born as a mutant with the appearance of a demon, it's better to change the name of the book to 'Marvel: I Reincarnated as a Demon' to be honest. That said, my advice is to change the name of the book, because as I said, it is extremely misleading. Secondly, it has two systems, the gacha/template one I understand, but the class one is completely useless so far to be honest. Other than that, it's a good read.

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I admit that the title is a bit misleading, but I chose it to make it more attention-grabbing. However, it has a good point, and anyway, thank you for the review.

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