I don’t really like how she going the hero route but I get it I guess. I feel it would be a more interesting story if she was a anti-hero, not good or not evil. I want her to struggle and go through character development. From the first chapter till now everything was just handed to her and she’s just going with the flow, I want her to make more decisions for herself and build more depth as a character. But author I can see how it’s still the beginning of the story so I might have to wait a while for more depth to the story then. But overall the story hasn’t hooked me yet, like it doesn’t have me actively waiting for the next chapter.
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