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Aizashi
AizashiLv21mth
2024-11-15 06:47

writing quality: If not for a few strange sentences here and there that don't really make sense as they are or have a logical issue, i would give this 6 stars. that's not possible, but i still want to express how much i like the way it's written. it feels just as immersive as the many books on my shelf. it also really fits the overall mood and world. story development: i haven't reached very far, but it heavily reminds me of plenty of royal romance face slapping webtoons, only that there's no romance, but honestly, i don't even miss it! reading it is simply satisfying. character design: i can't complain much. The characters are unique, and there isn't an overload of useless characters, meaning each introduced character has a clear role and is easily distinguished. the reason i only gave 4 stars here is that they aren't described much, which makes it a bit hard to be sure what they're supposed to look like. updating stability: I have no clue as i haven't caught up yet. Enjoy the free 5 stars, author! world background: i love the vibes, and i love the setting. it's not anything no one else has thought of before, but there's a healthy amount of "unusual" combinations, which, in turn, make it feel fresh and lift it from the masses. personal notes: If you want to see the protagonist fight and struggle, this novel isn't for you. the hardships already happened, so he's now on a face slapping spree, easily making all the villains miserable and coughing up blood (not quite so dramatic in the novel, that's just me). but if you like that, go for this novel!

Lord of Caldera

Aurora22
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219 Chs

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Thank you brother i appreciate it a lot. i wish you a great day.

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aw, thank you! i wish you a great day, too~ ✨️

Aurora22:Thank you brother i appreciate it a lot. i wish you a great day.
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