Aurora22

good novel. havent read somthing like this in a while, thank you

I guess I kind of baited you into reading with those tags :) I apologize for that. Those tags were added when I first started the novel, but as the story progressed, my initial plans and ideas changed, and I never updated them. Thank you for the good review, even though it wasn’t what you were looking for.

No, sir. It was a long and entertaining journey, but good things must come to an end. Anything beyond this would only ruin the great work invested before. Thank you for reading this far—I am truly grateful for that.

I don't think there are words to describe how much I liked the novel and the emptiness I felt after completing it. The way the story's written is so good, with information on the world slowly being unraveled as we explore it along with the mc just keeps you anticipating and speculating about what might happen next.

thank you :), but its not dropped its complete

Yes, kind of, although I still think it's bordering on confidence here.

the song bro the song with the awakening is what really made it epic

I did remember at the end :)

thank you

This novel kind of reminds me of the old books' style of writing—everything feels rushed. The concept is great, the story is great, and the idea is amazing. The family relationships are fine, and I dislike heartless MCs, but why, just why, is it so fast-paced? Give us time to see other people's reactions and developments. You have Fang Ming and Mr. Brown creating the most advanced rifle of the time—cool, even perfect—but then, suddenly, contracts are secured, and many are sold just like that? Come on! Where are the generals' reactions? Where are the soldiers praising it? Everything happens so fast it's hard to keep up. Reading this feels like a detective novel where you have to stay completely focused, or you'll be lost entirely.